tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7574822672391090343.post3812038961891631481..comments2023-06-07T03:18:27.705-07:00Comments on Enchanted Oak: Sex and the ChimichangaEnchanted Oakhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14815997287116818456noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7574822672391090343.post-87513361226021050582010-01-16T10:44:24.755-08:002010-01-16T10:44:24.755-08:00What a fun depiction of such a wild and crazy plac...What a fun depiction of such a wild and crazy place...Venice Beach. These could be the words to a song...cha..cha..chimis!Tall Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06278195551060786353noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7574822672391090343.post-80239049409308193132010-01-13T12:51:49.170-08:002010-01-13T12:51:49.170-08:00Mui Bueno!!
I got my eye on YOU!!!!!Mui Bueno!!<br /><br />I got my eye on YOU!!!!!G-Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14968807697181554781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7574822672391090343.post-62208376306686511152010-01-13T11:32:23.446-08:002010-01-13T11:32:23.446-08:00Chris, here is a word I rarely use, but no other w...Chris, here is a word I rarely use, but no other will do: AWESOME!!!<br /><br />Awesome, awesome, awesome!!!!Kat Mortensenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16877694888419628533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7574822672391090343.post-36798482349835898072010-01-13T08:37:36.207-08:002010-01-13T08:37:36.207-08:00Nice, Chris. This makes me remember those college ...Nice, Chris. This makes me remember those college days.Sydhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05642843245634635843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7574822672391090343.post-2836057783974994862010-01-13T07:48:42.621-08:002010-01-13T07:48:42.621-08:00Wonderful! Makes my drive-thru trips to Taco Bell...Wonderful! Makes my drive-thru trips to Taco Bell seem a bit bland. Great imagery. I'm hungry now.<br /><br />namasteAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16128247878961221421noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7574822672391090343.post-84101956302008437112010-01-13T06:59:31.629-08:002010-01-13T06:59:31.629-08:00That was enchantingly fun to read about!
Secretia...That was enchantingly fun to read about!<br /><br />SecretiaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7574822672391090343.post-17522089224102625172010-01-13T05:18:23.838-08:002010-01-13T05:18:23.838-08:00You hooked me at Venice beach and "hot fat to...You hooked me at Venice beach and "hot fat to fry a fresh batch." That's a line you just don't hear every day.<br /><br />Brilliant.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7574822672391090343.post-74927330869262347122010-01-13T04:24:16.282-08:002010-01-13T04:24:16.282-08:00lol I am there :-) thank you for the brief "v...lol I am there :-) thank you for the brief "vacation" this morningScott M. Freyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11588618061480681504noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7574822672391090343.post-81033356929754846112010-01-13T02:43:05.472-08:002010-01-13T02:43:05.472-08:00The writing style fits Venice. I miss southern ca,...The writing style fits Venice. I miss southern ca, all those little places where you can buy real mexican food. The best burritos in the world used to be in Bishop, just south of Mammoth. Oh well, you took me down memory lane. Love the style of writing in this post.Anonymous :)https://www.blogger.com/profile/14866852475568786172noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7574822672391090343.post-13558849139665851242010-01-13T00:08:20.022-08:002010-01-13T00:08:20.022-08:00what a delightful poem. took me right there to ven...what a delightful poem. took me right there to venice beach... the way it looks in my imagination, drawn by your colourful words, that is...Shadowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05999801833389058410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7574822672391090343.post-88456152460573349352010-01-12T21:39:23.897-08:002010-01-12T21:39:23.897-08:00Your poetry takes me to the sunny place in your me...Your poetry takes me to the sunny place in your memory. jeNNbig Jennhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16539934994452947108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7574822672391090343.post-78645043444428752392010-01-12T18:32:26.209-08:002010-01-12T18:32:26.209-08:00I love the voice in this and the point of view. Th...I love the voice in this and the point of view. This is fun and funny and delightful! Bravo!Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7574822672391090343.post-16565495173820684842010-01-12T18:22:05.041-08:002010-01-12T18:22:05.041-08:00Oh, yeah! This is just what I needed to read toda...Oh, yeah! This is just what I needed to read today. I was feeling sort of mopey, and you picked me right up. I love the playfulness and the humor. I laughed out loud at what Anton and Pancho say in the first stanza. Wonderful rhythm, and it's so much fun to read. I'll bookmark this one for sure!Juliehttp://www.juliebuff.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7574822672391090343.post-70010622277568796672010-01-12T16:49:57.048-08:002010-01-12T16:49:57.048-08:00What versatility! I'm am falling right in line...What versatility! I'm am falling right in line with Walking Man on this one. Great flow and fantastic imagery.Monkey Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06741294113777908130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7574822672391090343.post-31625316698881469122010-01-12T16:13:37.961-08:002010-01-12T16:13:37.961-08:00i totally want to hear this one read...great story...i totally want to hear this one read...great story, great flow...and i too am now hungry. smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7574822672391090343.post-63542766192669758142010-01-12T16:10:53.006-08:002010-01-12T16:10:53.006-08:00This is a wonderfully expressive, descriptive free...This is a wonderfully expressive, descriptive free verse. I can see it all now, Venice Beach, roller blades, sand, and taste those high calorie chimchangas - but then those sexy teens, with the slim bodies, didn't worry about that sort of thing!RNSANEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02841873957894861725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7574822672391090343.post-89922778458520533622010-01-12T07:15:00.229-08:002010-01-12T07:15:00.229-08:00I'm hungry, very hungry now!I'm hungry, very hungry now!Jess Mistress of Mischiefhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14766848582303523764noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7574822672391090343.post-1334163111875386702010-01-12T02:53:16.654-08:002010-01-12T02:53:16.654-08:00I like this narrative style Just Chris...the story...I like this narrative style Just Chris...the story flows very well and is funny in the imagery imparted.the walking manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10058913927297370740noreply@blogger.com