To get the gist of what happened to me, you might listen to the song first, then read the poem that arose from it. I’ve posted the poem before, so if it sounds familiar, please just enjoy Sarah singing.
Look at It This Way
this is you
this is her
twin threads twining in space
up and up andupandup
sinuous as snakes
the dance of the double helix
making life grow high
this is you
this is her
round notes soaring
high and round as the moon
in a purple sky
full of light a bird in flight
a waltz of wind and feather
mounting waves of air
this is you
this is her
a swelling-rising-rearing-
crashing wave
shatters on the sand
and the sand soothes
calms and suckles
a soft sighing washing smooth
the rough edges and the fury
this is you
this is her
strong arms gripping
across the precipice of loneliness
strong limbs bowing with the wind
strong lines moored in heavy seas
above all holding fast
in the face of all storms
22 comments:
This is lovely, Enchanted, your words and the song and music, as if made for each other. Seasons greetings.
this is stunning, Chris! maybe we can't have poetry without music or music without poetry? the line between the two often blurs to me.
thank you so much for sharing this at Poetry Jam. it's a beautiful song!
dani ♥
nice...love the repitition in this chris...effective...and to find that one to entwine that makes the loneliness go away...nice take...
Ah, beautiful Brightman song; but I don't know French so could only enjoy the images and the voice.
A strong write. I loved the last stanza, picturing the strength that can hold fast in the face of storms (of life).
So full of emotion, complex and needs a few readings and I feel that I need to say just keep hanging on in there.
This was playing on my stereo/CD just yesterday ... so many of the tracks on the CD bring me to tears ... this is one of them. Thank you for another opportunity to listen ... your poem is as moving as the music, Chris. Happy New Year.
I am glad you shared this again Chris as I did not see it the first time. Wonderful that it broke writer's paralysis for you. I like the repetition in this as well as the images. Oh and I very much like the photo of the oak trees.
Thanks Chris. I like your ocean imagery. Something that I never tire of reading or seeing.
This song really opened your heart! You have been on a roll ever since;)
I had not heard the song before, I closed my eyes and got carried away for a minute. Lovely.
This was lovely, and isn't it great when breakthroughs occur? I wish you much joy in the new year and I'm still taking my vitamins!
I especially like.... moored in heavy seas...in the face of all storms-
and yes music transports and transforms us if we allow it!
Thanks and Happy New Year!
Beautiful! :)
Hi Chris :-) I couldn't put th etune on, in a coffee shop without my headphones lol.
Lovely piece to read... I've been away from creative writing for awhile but not stressing about it. It came before, it will come again. I've found it best not to force. Thankfully, I don't earn a living through creative writing, or I'd be in trouble right now.
Thanks for visiting my blog and for the wwords of enouragement :-)
I love this! Beautiful writing.
Chris - SO lovely!
above all holding fast
in the face of all storms
Happy New Year to you!
Chris i love Sarah B sounds. Thank you for the 'story'...what brought you back, what saved you from the storms.
Sometimes i believe music plays a huge role in our enjoyment of the human experience. Thank you God!
Thanks for your visit...we were long overdue for a reunion in blog posting!
PEACE!
WHile I have never heard your voice, I can almost hear you speaking the words of this beautiful piece,
this is powerful, your words sing.
Happy New Year.
A beautiful poem with such strong images. It makes me imagine those fountains where the jets of water entwine and rise up and up and up, then crash back down. Just lovely.
a soft sighing washing smooth
the rough edges and the fury
That is beautiful.
Love the music...very inspiring and sweeping ~
I feel the swelling, rising and rearing of your words. May you write more beautiful words ~
Cheers~
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The music is wonderful. I love the video, too with all those lovely lush images. Your words match the music and mood- lovely.
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