The Totalfeckineejit's world-famous Poetry Bus trundles around the continents today as if the Master himself had the controls. Why, yes indeedie, he does!
He, Master of the World's Greatest Blog, Master of the World's Darkest Verse, has set forth a challenge most odd. "Git down wit' yore bad self and tell us who ya be." (I'm paraphrasing)
So if you don't like sentimental hogwash, hie thee over to the Eejit's blog where several brilliant anti-arty-farty types can be tracked down.
Don’t Haul Me to the Dump Yet
I am a breath in a garbage can
restrained
by the lid
hovering over the debris half-filling the can
half-filling the can! Optimism floats
in the molecules of breath, my elemental life
contained
in a paper sack
from a fast-food joint, twisted closed
and disposed of here
hovering over the debris half-filling the can.
Here is the map of my scars
wadded up but still it charts
the web of
red-veined
highways, crosswise roadways that led me
to this half-full garbage can.
Here desiccated flowers prove
my journey passed through gardens
and thus not all was lost
but much
remained
nor is it garbage, the debris
half-filling the can.
Girdles have retired here, napping
with tie-dyed shirts and platform shoes
dried red teardrops on Waterford crystal
the first night alone in my first house
Here Thoreau still beats his drum
Neruda murmurs love songs in coffee-
stained
books.
I breathe. I float.
I gain
I am a breath in a garbage can
restrained
by the lid
hovering over the debris half-filling the can
half-filling the can! Optimism floats
in the molecules of breath, my elemental life
contained
in a paper sack
from a fast-food joint, twisted closed
and disposed of here
hovering over the debris half-filling the can.
Here is the map of my scars
wadded up but still it charts
the web of
red-veined
highways, crosswise roadways that led me
to this half-full garbage can.
Here desiccated flowers prove
my journey passed through gardens
and thus not all was lost
but much
remained
nor is it garbage, the debris
half-filling the can.
Girdles have retired here, napping
with tie-dyed shirts and platform shoes
dried red teardrops on Waterford crystal
the first night alone in my first house
Here Thoreau still beats his drum
Neruda murmurs love songs in coffee-
stained
books.
I breathe. I float.
I gain
more filling.
20 comments:
I smell you!
(taken from the film -my current fav- Avatar- "I SEE You"
we love unconditionally.
Di
The can half full tells me what kind of person you are. Nice trip down memory lane with mention of platform shoes and things of a time gone by.
Oh gain, we do ! refuse collected- hmmm-
I am glad you were the breath in this-
and above the remains...Very interesting!
thanks.
Chris!! This was awesome! I love it truly.
It can be a dirty business looking at ourselves up close!
x
very cool!
Love the succulent plants too!!! So cool to see such fat juicy green growing in such rocky sandy soil!
'Neruda murmurs love songs in coffee-stained books.I breathe. I float.I gain.' Loved the ending! You can find lots of good stuff hal-filling the can!
And what saves us is what has built our mound.
I love the perspective here and that killer last line. Perfect!
Half-full - yes we are are - there's no almost ready for the dump for us!
I do so love your poetry! I feel like I really get what you are saying.
"Neruda murmurs love songs in coffee-
stained books."
Perfect.
Lovely...trash must be a theme today...
A garbage can or a time capsule that is really smelly. :-D We all have garbage but you make it seem so intimate and revealing. Luv it.
♥namaste♥
Love the repetition. Almost expected it at the end instead of I gain. But therein lies the meat of ya, ye eternal optimist of grime and grit! You smell pretty to me.
xo
erin
"Here Thoreau still beats his drum
Neruda murmurs love songs in coffee-
stained books."
Wonderful line. I just want to haul myself right there.
I like that some of these things have retired. Nice memories on some of these.
Optimism floats
in the molecules of breath
And that's what keeps us going!
really dense poem, and i mean that in a good, wow so rich with imagery, kind of way.
very evocative
All deadly Chris, but this bit is just great!
dried red teardrops on Waterford crystal
the first night alone in my first house
Here Thoreau still beats his drum
Neruda murmurs love songs in coffee-
stained
books.
I breathe. I float.
I gain.
A little poem in itself. Delicious!
Well now, Ms. Weigandt, I will just tell you what I think. When did I not? Freshly ground coffee. God love it, I offered you something of true value after all. Wonderful poetin' this is. sse
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