Then Wednesday evening, a friend mentioned her husband had been laid low by some sort of contagious bug. A friend of his had suffered from it earlier and apparently passed it on. I asked what the symptoms were and learned they were precisely what I was experiencing.
I guess I’ve been sick. But I seem to have slept as much as my body can take for now, so I tackled a poem that I’ve been wanting to post here, about an epiphany I had in a parking lot recently. With a little whack, whack, it has become a tale told in 55 words, as required by the Friday Flash 55 club hosted by the world-renowned G-Man, Mr. Knowitall Himself. Hie thee over there to see how succinctly people can tell stories.
The sign on the van
DEL MONTE MEAT CO.
with its giant capital M on MEAT
like a shark’s yawning mouth
made me remember how badly
you wanted to devour me
on our first date
and there at the Mobil gas station
I realized I escaped
in the nick of time
oh so long ago
About the photo: Just an odd sculpture I saw on my trek to Northern California last month.
22 comments:
Sounds like there is more to this story than 55 words allow. But 55's let us readers fill in the blanks.
escaped? i dunno, i might not have tried too hard...smiles. fun 55. hope you feel better chris...
Oh, so many of us escaped on those first dates! Memories, memories!
Boy oh Boy Chris...
This sure has an Animalistic Power to it.
I Loved it.
Thanks for thinking about The Friday Funfest whilst being sick.
You are Wonderful.
Please have a Kick Ass Week-End
Sorry you've been under the weather. Hope you're on the mend. I'm glad you made your escape...if it was the right thing to do. :)
I hope you're on the mend. I saw some beautiful sunflowers in the market and thought of you.
Nice...!
Sounds like a lucky escape. Well, from the guy, if not from the bug.
Solid versifying.
Did you grab a Slurpee on your way out? No one leaves a gas station without something to eat or drink anymore.
Some cuts of meat taste better than others and some escapes are not as good as others. We were so much younger then. And now we understand what a good cut of meat means to the palate.
Both the poem and the photo raise a lot of questions. As good poetry and photography should.
gosh, I hope ya get to feeling better!!
great 55, always leaves me wondering, thinking, imagining :-)
my 55 is here: www.sobernuggets.blogspot.com
I knew that guy--or his clone. Excellently and vividly built little 55--works in all ways.
Hope you feel better soon--I too am sickened by housecleaning, but its all the chems in the cleaning products for me--or just that I hate it. ;_)
Get Well Soon!
Enjoyed the 55; dark, dark.
Ahh, I thought that sculpture looked familar. It's somewhere in the wine country!
Glad you escaped. Many others aren't so lucky and are ashamed to admit it.
Aaahhh.. instincts!! They come in real hand at times.. don't they?! :)
Loved this one, my friend...
Perfect 55! I've dodged a few such bullets in my time, too.
prayers.
get well soon...
lovely 55.
ah! just in time huh? :D
That's a really cute and groovy poem. Plus, the sculpture is pretty cool also--I could take him home with me :)
Linda
http://blueskiescloudydays.blogspot.com/
Being devoured is fun as long as the teeth don't sink in too far.
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