Here's a tale about a lady named Doris who is insanely in love with her new beau, Guido. She sits at her desk, thinking of him:
The audience of organs freezes in midbeat.
The stomach recoils, leaps high on its toes,
lands, sprints, does a stunning
double back flip with a twist, sticks the landing.
Thunderous applause from the kidneys.
The intestines wave their arms.
The delirious lungs whistle
and the heart pounds its feet
in the bleachers.
Meanwhile, Doris shivers.
The stomach recoils, leaps high on its toes,
lands, sprints, does a stunning
double back flip with a twist, sticks the landing.
Thunderous applause from the kidneys.
The intestines wave their arms.
The delirious lungs whistle
and the heart pounds its feet
in the bleachers.
Meanwhile, Doris shivers.
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The photo is from a gymnastic coaching website. Sorry I can't be more specific.
31 comments:
That was a very interesting 55. Excellent.
I. Absolutely. Loved. That. :)
I smiled thinking about those intestines waving their arms and the delirious lungs whistling... and I could totally relate to how that feels. :) Good stuff!
Peace and love/ Jo.
I can feel this one!!!
Ps...love the photo below, of the sweet peas too!
Mine is "LOST IN THE TRANSLATION"
Have a great weekend! [and as always, scroll down a bit to find my 55]
Love these lively (and living) reactions to her thoughts about her man!
yeah, i am shivering a bit too...nice 55 chris...guido, smiles.
wow! your 55 left my heart flip-flopping with the thought of new love...literally ;) a very creative post, i loved it!
Every part of the anatomy gets involved in a new love relationship.
Nice 55.
been there,, done that, glad it's over but miss the thrill
"sits at her desk" ~ is there really any sitting possible with all the moving going on inside? Spirited and energetic 55! Really nice.
My 55 is up (though it's a "66" today ~ I granted myself an exception):
Friday Flash 55 ~ Butterfly Kisses
Full bodied Applause!
Nice 55, thanks. Mine's up as well at http://bit.ly/8dt963. Have a great weekend!
Romeo and Juliett, Marc Anthony and Cleopatra and now Doris and Guido...wonderful!!!
Oh, this is great. It made me smile. I started reading it with a grin that got wider as I read.
Someone has a pretty strong gut feeling about Guido. My 55 is HERE to choke you up.
That is quite a different take on a love story. Your mind is so artistic.
Phew, you got me shivering too... Love the way you used the body bits guts et al!
A man named Guido is definitely likely to make a woman named Doris' all a-fluttery, thundery, shivery.
I think I'm getting this. It is fantastic.
What a great description of something very hard to describe
I wonder if she is co-dependent. Or maybe it's just those endorphins.
i never knew all that was involved in a shiver great 55!!
So that's what's happening to me when I hear my husband coming through the door!
I loved reading this! Thank you! - G
Excellent my friend. How clever :) Mine is up HERE. Have a great Friday :)
Whoah, talk about having your insides all a jumble.
This is so creative!
Well done! If we were scoring, I'd say you landed a perfect 10!
Emotional turmoil and gut wrenching go together nicely.
outstanding 55.
I love the uneasiness which your words evoke in me...
Happy Friday!
You Rock!
Very sweet and love so tender.
Mine is here
Have a great weekend!
Happy Mother's Day!
hugs
shakira
Great 55! :-)
Intestines waving their arms made quite the mental image for me. :)
Well done!
So that's what is happening when my body just SCREAMS at me...
GoooooD "55" Chris!
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