Lindy has a thing for picking up sticks wherever she goes—the park, of course, but also parking lots, surprisingly, with their flotsam of trash, will sometimes yield souvenirs of trees, and people’s front yards where a tree clapped its hands and threw a twig, and the ocean coughs up sticks among the kelp, wrecked histories of trees from foreign lands, stories caught in their cellulose and they’ll never tell.
Lindy has trampled on sticks, passed many sticks by with hardly a glance. She has picked up a stick and then thrown it away. She has walked with a stick and then cast it aside, as if it had finished what it wanted to say and its mystery was solved.
But some whisper to Lindy and Lindy picks them up, holds them up to the sky, turns them this way and that, studying their curvature or architecture or God knows what. Maybe she imagines a skeleton with that bone of the tree. Whatever they say, whatever they are is for Lindy alone, her ears and her eyes, and she won’t explain why if you ask her, only shrug with indifference holding on to the stick. And that stick comes home, joins others in jars, and Lindy’s house is a tree of myriad limbs, a Joseph’s coat of a tree. It must sing like a choir only Lindy can hear, as branches grow over the windows and doors, break through the roof and reach for the sky.
Oh yes, EO, that is class writing. Opening with the name, Lindy, and then the use of it throughout, interwoven with the sticks - just brilliant. Loved it. Bravo.
Chris - You are one seriously gooood writer! The personification - trees clapping their hands and ocean coughing up sticks - is especially effective. I love the use of Lindy throughout. I see her clearly.
At first reading I thought Lindy was a dove or other stick gathering bird but eventually realised she is a person with a passion that is out of the ordinary, but no less strange in its way than collecting cigarette cards used to be. Of course it begs the question... who is she to you? Or maybe she is you!
Ha! So Lindy's not a bird! Is she my dog, my daughter, my eccentric aunt?
I sat down at my desk yesterday morning, glanced at the bouquet sitting there, and noticed that both the cherry twig and magnolia twig in the bouquet are alive and their buds are swelling.
Lindy was born, like Athena from Zeus, right out of my forehead, fully formed, armed, and named.
Lindy reminds me of someone I knew who had a fascination for leaves and pine cones. Each had to be perfect before it would be picked up and carried back.
Wow what a beautiful poem and though Lindy be born right out of ur forehead nevertheless connects us to so many Lindy's across the globe :) Glad I stopped by and read this
I thought Lindy was some speciL pet who brought home lovely things ( not dead rats and birds ), treasures that you place about your home. You write so brilliantly, Chris, I hang on to every word.
I like that Lindy. Feel her 'round here some. Saw her in a movie last night. Vaguely remember her from a book. Heard of her once in a song. Yup, like that Lindy and her ways.
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19 comments:
somehow, this just "sticks" in my mind as an excellent writing :-)
sorry, couldn't be helped!
Gorgeous - I love the choir of trees!
Lindy is quite a stickler for her twigs and branches. (This is Scott's fault - as you know, I never use bad puns)
Wonderful...I'm liking Lindy a lot. I can't help picking things up. Great poem.
Oh yes, EO, that is class writing.
Opening with the name, Lindy, and then the use of it throughout, interwoven with the sticks - just brilliant. Loved it. Bravo.
... a Joseph's coat of a tree ...
Wow!
Scott and Monkey Man:
I'll stick up for a bad pun anytime.
Chris - You are one seriously gooood writer! The personification - trees clapping their hands and ocean coughing up sticks - is especially effective. I love the use of Lindy throughout. I see her clearly.
Lindy knows which sticks are hers, and I enjoyed this post.
Oh yes. Lindy knows.
At first reading I thought Lindy was a dove or other stick gathering bird but eventually realised she is a person with a passion that is out of the ordinary, but no less strange in its way than collecting cigarette cards used to be. Of course it begs the question... who is she to you? Or maybe she is you!
Quite so - things have to FEEL right to be accepted into the fold...
I like the tree clapping its hands. You do personification so well.
(I'm assuming Lindy is a dog and not some mad relation!)
Ha! So Lindy's not a bird! Is she my dog, my daughter, my eccentric aunt?
I sat down at my desk yesterday morning, glanced at the bouquet sitting there, and noticed that both the cherry twig and magnolia twig in the bouquet are alive and their buds are swelling.
Lindy was born, like Athena from Zeus, right out of my forehead, fully formed, armed, and named.
Lindy reminds me of someone I knew who had a fascination for leaves and pine cones. Each had to be perfect before it would be picked up and carried back.
Oh, you creative thing you!!
Something as simple as that chance glance at your bouquet and you give birth!! :)
Wow what a beautiful poem and though Lindy be born right out of ur forehead nevertheless connects us to so many Lindy's across the globe :) Glad I stopped by and read this
I thought Lindy was some speciL pet who brought home lovely things
( not dead rats and birds ), treasures that you place about your home. You write so brilliantly, Chris, I hang on to every word.
I like that Lindy. Feel her 'round here some. Saw her in a movie last night. Vaguely remember her from a book. Heard of her once in a song. Yup, like that Lindy and her ways.
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erin
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